assignment three critique

Today we critiqued assignment three and i think i was told and got to discuss a few things that will actually help. Amanda brought up that the cursor is able to disappear which i think will make this sketch look even better than it did originally so i am going to change that immediately. Also Haley brought up the island and the tree and changing it in some way. I agree with this and am going to actually draw an island in illustrator and then import in the raster image. I think these two things alone will make a stronger composition. I feel like i did well with this assignment and  I'm excited to move forward with it now.