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Going in to this critique I was looking forward to what people had to say since I already had some ideas of my own as to how I could improve this piece and what I wanted to change. I want to make it so that the rain only works on the down key, not with any key, and that it resets once off the page. Not much more was said about this other than me asking how I would go about doing that and receiving advice as to how. Other than people giving compliments, I got one question as to why the trees are moving, but I enjoy that they change size and that is not going to change. I think I will also go and try to make the clouds change scale as well as they move across as was brought up during last critique.
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